Seasons (Villanelle)
Sun-drenched morn sadly yields her aims.With accomplished grace and caring,To chilly gusts that evening tames.Her legacy spirals green flamesMounts all florid sprays, now staring, Sun-drenched morn...
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Well done Sand$! A really good villanelle and they are difficult I know - having only written about four of them I know they need a great deal of thought and planning. Jean's Poems
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Jan, Merci Jean, your comment is greatly appreciated. Glad you liked this attempt of such a beautiful form.--S$
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S$, hope you had fun writing this. One of my favorite forms.RGFellowship of the Pen Need some exercise?..The Challenge Center
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I love this particular poetic form, and you've certainly done it well......APPLAUSE!Joyce E. O'Neal"I live and breath, yet never take either for granted.."Mutington's Meadow IIMutington's Meadow
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No wonder we see so few of these Villanelles--what a demanding form!Yours is very skilfully done, quite beautiful, a little sad.netwing
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Thank you for acknowledging this write, RG. I don't think fun would be an adequate description....how about relief... My first attempt as you know.Joyce and Netwing, your comments are much...
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S$, the secret to villanelle's is to make them funny. They are much easier that way Also, one variation that helps, is to use the same words in the repeat lines, but change their order to give...
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Good advice! Thanks, RG. I didn't realize they were meant to be funny. I will study more examples. --S$
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S$, funny is not a requirement of the form, it is just a way to make them easier to do.RGFellowship of the Pen Need some exercise?..The Challenge Center
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